Recycling Programme Review
To: Jenny McCabe
From: Harry Mohn
Date: July 30, 2020
Re: Review of the issues for the recycling programme
This is an update for the recycling programme. Last day I found out that there was an issue regarding the programme. And everyone seems following the old rule. Unfortunately, there would be changes for the rules regarding the said programme. There is some confusion over the types of plastic that are recyclable. I think it would be better if we would put a label for this so that they would beware on what materials are they going to put.
Harry Mohn,
Recycling Leader
You have organized your paragraphs very well and your grammar is good. My suggestion is maybe do pullet points of what's happening to the new program, but other than that your work is good. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThe context of this is on point and the format seems to be nice. However, i think there might be some error with the grammar and some sentences are missing punctuation. It's nice to read and check for mistakes before posting it. Overall, I think you did a nice job :)
ReplyDeleteNice work Nicole! Check the review example in the Learner's Guide and make sure you have included all of the required elements.
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